Alison- This is my favorite part of the piece: "She stopped. A chill like never before froze her like a prey animal who gets a whiff of enemy in the breeze. She opened her mouth to speak, to deny, but there were no lies between them and never had been. Until now." No lies between them is the key here. Great writing. Hope you're well this week? Cheers, -Thalia
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Alison- This is my favorite part of the piece: "She stopped. A chill like never before froze her like a prey animal who gets a whiff of enemy in the breeze. She opened her mouth to speak, to deny, but there were no lies between them and never had been. Until now." No lies between them is the key here. Great writing. Hope you're well this week? Cheers, -Thalia
Thalia, thank you! Doing well! Hope you are well, too. 💕
Terrific chapter. You painted the scene so well. Excellent job Alison. - Jim
Thank you, Jim!
“You are the only one who moves as like an owl in flight” — Lovely, evocative simile.
“I know about the indecent at the Federal Building.” — Should that be incident?
Ack! I will fix now! Thank you!