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Arthur McNamee's avatar

I felt like I was in the fight with Jackson the whole time. Great !

Alison Bull's avatar

Thank you, Arthur! Glad you enjoyed it and I’m happy to have you as a new reader šŸ’–šŸ“š

Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Wow Alison. Dog fight indeed. Tremendous action and great descriptive writing. A chapter to remember right there. Great job! - Jim

Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Really, really enjoyed it.

Annie Blackwell's avatar

Oooh! I love the tension. Clever escape. Very well done, Alison. My first read of the morning, and it has me raring to go!

Alison Bull's avatar

Thank you, Annie! I’m catching up on your story today!

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Excellent episode! Great action sequence! It's great to see a baddie get his due.