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Bob Hoebeke's avatar

Well done Alison, great writing, and compelling story! Thank you!

Alison Bull's avatar

Thank you, Bob!

Nick Richards's avatar

“The hat threatened to exit its landing spot, the wind vying for the real estate of Andersen’s head.”

I like your way of writing.

Alison Bull's avatar

I'm so glad. And glad to have comments on these posts! I appreciate all of them.

Lauren Sardineer's avatar

Love every detail!

Alison Bull's avatar

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!